2019考研英語(yǔ)一真題作文范文：精神品質(zhì)類(lèi)（堅(jiān)持）

　　2019年考研英語(yǔ)一作文解析

　　新東方在線(xiàn)

　　總體而言，今年英語(yǔ)一卷面難度系數(shù)適中：完型較易，閱讀適中，翻譯內(nèi)容涉及醫(yī)學(xué)論文，偏學(xué)術(shù)，難度系數(shù)較高，新題型延續(xù)17年和18年的排序題，難度適中，作文包含大作文和小作文，其中大作文適中，小作文題干中涉及內(nèi)容偏多，難度系數(shù)較高。

　　二、大作文

　　今年英語(yǔ)一大作文繼續(xù)沿襲圖畫(huà)作文，屬于單圖中的對(duì)立觀(guān)點(diǎn)類(lèi)型，難度系數(shù)適中。圖畫(huà)中兩個(gè)人在登山，其中右邊一個(gè)人垂頭喪氣的坐在臺(tái)階上，抱怨說(shuō)“累了，不想爬”，而左邊一人，背著背包，遞給他一杯水，并且說(shuō)“別，休息一下接著爬”，圖下有兩個(gè)字“途中”。

　　筆者在考研沖刺班中提及，歷年英語(yǔ)一考研作文主要體現(xiàn)為“社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)”“教育文化”“精神品質(zhì)”“環(huán)境保護(hù)”，請(qǐng)各位考生今年重點(diǎn)關(guān)注“教育文化”和“精神品質(zhì)”，果不其然，今年以“精神品質(zhì)”為主。

　　究其具體精神品質(zhì)，出發(fā)角度比較多，主流角度是左邊一個(gè)人身上體現(xiàn)出來(lái)的“堅(jiān)持”，“對(duì)夢(mèng)想的執(zhí)著追求”，當(dāng)然也有同學(xué)強(qiáng)調(diào)“在前進(jìn)道路中，陪伴和鼓勵(lì)”的重要性，還有同學(xué)劍走偏鋒，從圖中右邊一個(gè)人的角度出發(fā)，強(qiáng)調(diào)“在人生道路中，不必一直前行，有時(shí)休息是為了更好的前進(jìn)”。筆者建議從“堅(jiān)持”入手，最終落腳點(diǎn)略微提及“陪伴與鼓勵(lì)”。

　　第一段以提出問(wèn)題，圖畫(huà)描述為主，可以先總體描述圖中場(chǎng)景，然后細(xì)節(jié)突出左右兩個(gè)人言行上的差異，得出“堅(jiān)持”這一主題詞。第二段以分析問(wèn)題，展開(kāi)為主，分析圖畫(huà)所反映的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，展開(kāi)維度較多，筆者在新東方班次中提及的三大論證思路均適用“因果論證”“舉例論證”“正反論證”。思路一：因果論證，證明堅(jiān)持的好處或者為什么人們應(yīng)該堅(jiān)持;思路二：舉例論證，用具體名人事例證明堅(jiān)持的重要性;思路三：正反論證，如果堅(jiān)持則可以成功，反之，則會(huì)走向失敗。第三段以解決問(wèn)題，歸納總結(jié)為主，得出作者自己觀(guān)點(diǎn)，當(dāng)然是呼吁堅(jiān)持不懈，可以提及“同伴的鼓勵(lì)”會(huì)讓人生之路錦上添花，最后收尾總結(jié)。

　　【參考范文】

　　There are, as is symbolically and explicitly demonstrated in the cartoon above, two individuals climbing a mountain, with one guy on the left wearing a bag on the back and a beaming smile on the face who is encouraging the other one, unexpectedly, sitting on the half way and wanting to give up, which indicates the importance of persistence.

　　Obviously, these two guys directly epitomize a prevailing social phenomenon that is in life’s journey. Some people with keen eyesight can stick to their dreams, while others, on the contrary, may easily give up despite there is encouragement and accompaniment from their teammates. Hence, we cannot overemphasize the significance of persistence, with which we can overcome all adversities and hardships in long-term life’s journey. Otherwise, we would end up in failure and live in despair. Taking basketball player Yao Ming for example, he can slam-dunk smartly because he does his utmost in pursuing his dreams and never gives his ideal up.

　　From the preceding discussion, it is readily apparent that persistence is a pre-requisite on our way to success, since life is a long journey, while sticking to why we start is a must to the destination. Only by making constant efforts and never stopping making progress can we expect a bright and promising future!